Sunday, 2 November 2014

Feedback - Miss Spencer

You have moved on since I last gave you feedback, the Insidious analysis is very good, you have really thought about the conventions of horror and these can be used when planning your own film. However you need to tackle the points I made in the last feedback, and look at the point below, Please reply to this post when you have addressed these points so that I can reassess your work.
  • Come and talk to me about your images, they are not showing up and I suspect that you are not saving them as JPEG's, i can help you sort this out.
  • Tidy up the blog by checking all fonts (except for my feedback) are the same.
  • Make sure you have at least one more analysis on your blog.
  • Can you add your name to your blogger profile - at the moment it is coming up as 'unknown'
You are working on a level 2/3 border at the moment.

1 comment:

  1. Hi miss, I've tried to fix the fonts but I'm not sure if they look exactly the same yet. I haven't put on images yet on the Insidious, prelim and Holiday analysis' yet and will get them on as soon as I've done my last analysis. I had a look at my blogger profile and it says I have a name but will have a look at this again. I am getting the last analysis up as soon as possible and also the horror genre research. From the last feedback, I have added a bit more on the editing on the Holiday analysis.

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