You have made an excellent start Sam - using lots of media language and discussing the meaning of the elements you have picked out. You have really gone into detail, thinking about meanings, characterisation and narrative as well as sound, mise en scene. I would like to see a few tweaks:
- Think about editing a little more
- Add a few more images in some of the analysis
- Make sure all of your fonts/text sizes are the same.
I would put this on a level 3, bordering a level 4
Well done
Miss Spencer
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